新课改下英语正反观点类作文教学案例
【学习目标】
1.学习正反观点对比类作文常用句式；
2.掌握英语作文写作步骤；
3一句多译练习；
4.提高学生写作能力
任务一：英语正反观点类作文常用句式
【课前预习检测】我不懂，我要问
1.导入部分：We had a heated discussion about Opinions about ...are divided/Different people hold different ideas/opinions
2.表达观点：Some are for（赞成） the idea.../...of them hold the opinion/think that.../...of the class are in favor of （赞成）the idea that...
3. 不同观点：However，... of them hold a different view that .../hold the opposite （相反的）opinion./People who are against it don’t think so.
4.表达自己观点：In my opinion， /As far as I am concerned...
任务二：英语作文写作步骤
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步骤：1-6，（1）审题；（2）翻译要点；（3）连词成句；（4）连句成篇；（5）润色；（6）检查抄写。
任务三：实战演练巩固
【师导生学】我学习 我明白！
实战操练：最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。（60%的同学认为不应收门票：（1）公园是公众休闲的地方；（2）如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象。40%的同学认为应收门票但票价不宜过高：（1）支付园林工人工资；（2）购新花木）
1.审题
（1）确定文体：正反观点议论文；（2）讨论主题：公园要不要收门票；（3）确定人称：第三人称；（4）确定时态：一般现在时、将来时必要时用被动语态。
2.翻译要点
（1）收门票（charge entrance fee）；（2）公众休闲的地方（a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves）；（3）建大门、围墙，影响城市形象（build gates and walls， affect the appearance of the city.）（4）票价不宜高 （the price should not be high）；（5）支付园林工人工资 （pay money for garden workers）；（6）购买新花 （buy new plants and flowers）。
3.连词成句、润色
（1）The topic of whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks is becoming more and more popular recently .there are two sides of opinions about it/Our opinions are divided on this topic.
（2）Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees should not be charged .（同位语从句/被动句）
（3）A park is a place where people rest and relax.（定语从句）
（4）With entrance fees charged， it will be necessary to build gates and walls，which will do harm to the appearance of the city.（with复合结构）
（5）The income from entrance fees is used to /is made use of pay the gardeners and buy new plants and flowers.（高级词汇）
4.连句成篇
【达标检测】小组来比赛 Come on！
给出这篇作文的范文，去除所有连接词、过渡句以及插入语，让学生做挖空练习。并总结英语作文中常用的连接词和过渡句。
First，Second，Third，Last /Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly，Finally（表示特定的顺序关系） What is more；Besides；In addition：To make the matter worse（表示递进） I think/ I firmly believe that ...In my opinion，/Iin my view（表达个人观点的用语）
5.检查抄写
任务四：归纳总结
（正反观点式议论文模板我学习，我快乐）
Recently we’ve had a heated discussion about whether we should...there are two sides of opinions about it.
Most of the students are in favor of it. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally... However， the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place，...What’s more...In addition
Personally，the advantages overweigh the disadvantages，for it will do us more good than harm，so I support it.
【作业布置】
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